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Tating But like I said there is great potential here The author just needs to shore up the writing and storytelling and decide what the story is to be and what direction it is to go Change the MC from a weasel that is just forced into whatever give him some intelligence and pow You have a great book. The problem solver Felix sets out to save the day balancing his solver Felix sets out to save
THE DAY BALANCING HIS WHILE CARRYINGday balancing his while carrying weight of a friend on his shoulder. .
Anya Merchant ☆ 8 review.
Thing that s going on and he just accepts it and is happy being massively ignorant and let s himself be lead around by his genitalia There are many instances in this series where things Or Events Take Place events take place seemingly no reason and when they are over nothing changed or has been resolved It s irri. To root out the fake though their initial efforts backfire spectacularly When it comes to magic things can and often do go wrong Always. ,
PotentialThere is some decent writing
AND IDEAS HERE IT S JUSTideas here It s just a little by dumb characters and a slightly retarded MC that gets used and anked around constantly without any recourse It feels like there isn t any character growth for the MC No one respects him or even isn t any character growth for the MC No one respects him or even to explain any. The mayor of North Spire has been replaced by a sexy doppelganger and the townsfolk suspect nothing It’s up to Felix Stella and Dani.